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The Problem With Leo Valdez - Comments
I'm loving it! Good job with the dialogue between Leo and the Eidolon, it really made me feel like I was in the room with them! Hope you keep writing!
ooh love this, update soon. But leo's strong, please let him be able to fight it eventually!! Love this story, update soon! :D
Hey, it's great! Awesome job, as long as you remember to punctuate a bit more, no offense at all but it at times seemed like one long, ongoing sentence if you know what I mean. By that's the only thing and other than that it's a great story! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!:)
Pls,pls,pls update this!!!
3/2/15