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OMG!! Why are you not updating this story? It looks really good and interesting. Please, don't lose hope and stop, keep writing and awaken the budding author in you! This is really good.

need more!

This is really good, but when you do your quotes could you please separate them from the paragraphs? Otherwise it's really good, and the twist is really cool.

I really like the twist you put in this! Please keep writing!!!

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But it rocks!

She wasn't trying to be rude she was only trying to tell you her thoughts.

Wow I love it and don't get disheartened by those who don't like your creativity just because you don't ship the same otp... be yourself... keep up the good work

I meant to send that to ImAwesome btw

@IM AWESOME
Hey that was kind of rude, comments are here for people to comment on your story. Lighten up a little, okay! :). And your story was really good to me I like how you twisted the plot. It broke my heart about Annabeth- I ship Percabeth like heck so I find it hard to believe Percy would do that. Andastra (whatever her name is) seems like a cool character, the only daughter of Artemis! I'm confused about the knife scar slash on Luke's face I thought it was a dragon and he's also a Titan? Anyways keep writing and don't let the others get to you even if its different from the actual books!

@IM AWESOME


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@Percabeth Shipper

I'm a very creative person, so if you don't like my story okay. You don't have to comment on it and well ruin my day, so thanks for the 'help' but next time keep it to yourself!

I only read about 1 and a half chapters... it;s not very good, sorry.

I dont want to sound rude but how do I put this. Maybe if you kept it kinda by the book then maybe it would be more good