Echoes In The Stream - Comments

Keep. Going. Or you will suffer the pudding curse!

@King of the ghosts
What?

@ArtemisHunter99

@ArtemisHunter99
Thanks!!

Listen. I know it's confusing but it would be nice if you WAITED!!!! =D it was supposed to be a teaser and a bit of a puzzle! And the warriors if stars is hunters of Artemis because Artemis is also goddess of stars and I think we can all agree that they are warriors. Please don't insult me like this. I meant to do it!!!!!
yes sea weed brain. You can do it.

Warriors of the stars? Hunters of Artemis? Say wwwwhat?!?! This is for stories, not 10 year olds trying to write.

Chapter 2 is weird. I mean, chapter 1 was good, and looked interesting, but chapter 2 sucked. I'm going right to fact here. I mean, Where is Annabeth? What are her feelings? 17 years? Say what?! Really confused there. It's not even a chapter!

Can I do the next one?

Yup.

Yeah, Lol.

@Daughter_Of_Athena
Ha ha Lol

Ok! Thanks because I was like Whaaaaaaaaat?!!

Sorry...

I fixed it. Sorry I couldn't stop think'en about the name Natalie. Sorry Cady.

@Daughter_Of_Athena
It's a mistake I can't change it

But in forest of blood it says that like is the brother. So if Percy is luke you better change that last chapter, or some people might be mislead.

@Daughter_Of_Athena
No no no, Percy's new name is Luke lisgracha.

Well, in the forest of blood at the last part it says "you are now Natalie Lisgracha" and in the characters part of this NATALIE IS A GIRL!!

@Daughter_Of_Athena
What do you mean?

I think I know where the start of this story will start. And I'm not sure if I'll like it. I hope you make sure that at the end Annabeth gets her BOY!!