The Death of Her - Comments

Love it keep going

It's fine

@Son of the Sky
:3 Thank you. SO DREADFULLY SORRY for the late reply, I don't usually check this story~

Not your best work? I may not have read your other work but THIS story is amazing.

I really do appreciate all the feedback, guys. It helps me write a lot.

@DaughterOfTheSky
Thank you! I appreciate the support. :)

I was balling! Then at the end, the little trick you did, made me pass out! I have never read another story that switched them like that. Good writing!

@SON OF...my parents
She was never dead. They thought she was. It's a reverse of what happened to Percy in the Battle of the Labyrinth.

@SON OF...my parents
She was never dead. They thought she was. It's a reverse of what happened to Percy in the Battle of the Labyrinth.

is she dead or a spirit

I was almost crying! Then that happened and it took me like 2 minutes to comprehend! I was just sitting there blinking, just like,"Wait what?" Good Job!!!

@Filia_Neptuni
Just call me mini-Rick. :) And thank you!

@Filia_Neptuni
Just call me mini-Rick. :) And thank you!

Me too!

Dude, I was so fracking close to crying! It was well-written but ugh. My heart!

@fansoldier
wow that was unexpected. I loved it!

Not bad actually its pretty good!!!

AWSOMENESS!!!!!!