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Nico and Reyna's quest with the Athena Parthenos - Comments
This is neat! I would just offer my advice to break it up into paragraphs, especially when people are talking, so it's easier to see what's happening!
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The way to get more readers is to keep writing! Your story will show up often as recently updated and more people will see it! :)
@The_Bright_One
I just want know if people will read it if I add more chapters today, cuz if I can know more people want to read it more than I'll keep writing5
@The_Bright_One
Thank you for the tips, like i said this my first story so far, its actually something I wrote for history when we had to write a story based on greek myths and my teacher let me write something from percy jackson or the heroes of olympus. Thanks to the 39 who read I expected almost no one would read
This is a really good story so far! :) just a few tips; try and split you ideas into paragraphs so that there's a new line for every new idea or person speaking. It'll make it run way smoother and make it more attractive for readers! Also consider putting up some cover art to attract new readers! Keep going! I love it so far! :)
Over 1,000 views in atleast 3 weeks! Wow im suprised people like to read my story
7/13/14