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A few grammar and spelling issues, but I can ignore that because it's adorable, except for percabeth breakup
@ilovepercabeth
Well, let´s just say that Erick´s jerk personality came from my ex-boyfriend...I cant believe I date that guy... anyways I´m really happy thet you liked my story it means A LOT and it makes me happy that all of you guys support me!
I can only say one thing-wow
keep up with the amazing stories!Will look foward to it
By the way,how did you create a jerk like eric?
AHHHH!!! So excited for Always Together 2!!!!! Can't wait for Erick's revenge =DD
Percabeth all the wayyyyy <3 <3
@Emperatriz1290
Sequel??????????????
i almost died while waiting for you to update!.... Can't wait to do it again!
LOOOOVE THE STORY SO MUCH <3 <3
but i hate Erick, PERCY PLEASE COME FOR ANNABETH NOWWWW
please continue to write more, can't wait =D
I don't like Erick at all. I want to punch him. Also, Percy should come up and grab Erick by the collar and punch him and throw him in the sea, in which then Nico would banish him to the Underworld!
Although the storyline is very cute and appreciating to read, I think you should be a little more careful when you use verbs. You should use the Simple Past to express the idea that an action started and finished at a specific time in the past. :) Besides all that, I think the story is very warming and pretty adorable! Keep writing!
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I love it!
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