The Trident Seekers - Comments

@riyannaa.xx
Thank you!

@Burning Sun
It's totally fine:) thank you for letting me know I really appreciate it! And glad you like it:)) I'm really not one for lemon either, just thought the moment needed it☺️

Okay, I'm not dissing your story, I LOVED IT, I mean, up until you wrote the lemon. It's a good story, and yeah, the lemon got some key points across about how close they are, but I think you could find a non-lemon way to tell the readers that.

Awesome so far! Keep posting! I <3 IT

@ThePurpleDemigod_xo
Glad to to help. :)

@Filia Sapientia
Lol sorry! Glad to hear your feedback:) sorry about that, I know it gets confusing, I'll change it up:) thanks!

It sounds good so far, just remember to stay in one POV... In chapter three and five, you started off in third person POV, then you switched to first and then back to third... It gets too confusing if you keep switching POVs.