The Son of Artemis - Comments

hey the main character has the same first name as me

hey the main character has the same first name as me

Check a new hero out

@Magmashroom
Thank you! I really love percy Jackson and when I discovered this site you can imagine my excitement!

This really kind of seems like the actual series did any one else notice

*Woot woot!* And Darren has a little cameo in my story as well. If you're interested in reading my story, click this! http://www.percyjacksonfanfiction.com/Story/60293/The-Daughter-of-Hera/

And that ending tho! :O

With every chapter now in POVs, could you title them before you start their story? Because when reading each chapter I honestly can't tell who's talking... :/

Umm not trying sound mean but empousia is a vampire with fire hair, mist matched legs which one is mechanical bronze and the other is a donkey leg, they arent half snale

I like it! :) If you ever need help with cover art or spell checking then just let me know! Or honestly if you need any help with absolutely anything! :)

@The Bright One
Thanks! I'll try a little harder. I'm 12 years old and I'm gifted in English. But I'll try!!

@The Bright One
Thanks! I'll try a little harder. I'm 12 years old and I'm gifted in English. But I'll try!!

@The Bright One
Thanks! I'll try a little harder. I'm 12 years old and I'm gifted in English. But I'll try!!

I really like this idea and it's pretty well written! :D Maybe just consider putting in some paragraphs after each new idea and everytime a new person is speaking to help it flow a little better for the reader? Otherwise it's really good so far!
Keep writing! :D

@Striderbro
yeah it was good (Only read like 1 chapter though)

@percysbluefood
You...read my story?

@Striderbro
Thanks! I just posted chapter two so I hope you like it. There's not much action in chapter two but I will post chapter three right now! Be sure to recommend my story to other people. And I love your Blood of Titans story!!

@percysbluefood
Ok. I'm gonna trust you on this. It better be good. Lol

@Striderbro
I did it on purpose. Artemis wanted a special son. A secret son and you'll figure it out more into the sto

I like it. I really like the way you write too. Keep going.

Empousai aren't half women, half snake. You're thinking of dracnae.