How It All Began... (ON HOLD) - Comments

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@Homer
I know. I have had to do an overwhelming amount of research for my writing too, as my main pet peeve with it is that it is realistic and doesn't conflict with canon. Very tiring, but in the long run, worth it.

@Torissa Nikole

Yeah, I'll try and fix that. I had previously started the chapter on a totally different scene, but had to completely rewrite it.
And the research is very exhausting, with all the background info and what we're told in the books.

Very interesting. Some of it was confusing, and the switches between first and third person werea bit more so, but I really like the idea behind it all, and think that with some minor editing, it could have a lot of potential. Also, kudos for doing research! *thumbs up* :)

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