Wizards? - Comments

Please Update. You have the start of a really interesting story here.

@WritingDreams
I need to work on that. I was rushing and now that you mention it, I'll get working on it ASAP!

Quite appreciatting. I really like the way you express how your characters feel, but I would prefer it if the chapter was longer and made more sense. Also you may should give a little more information about your OC and describe character's appearances with more details. Aside from this, the story seems interesting.
Im interested into reading some more.