The New Addition To The Jackson Family - Comments, page 2

@Chelsea_Delos.
Than don't read it. I don't need any haters here. So find another story to hate on. Oh and while your at it you at get an attitude adjustment.
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This is dumb

i love it keep up the great work your a great writer thanks for writing on this site
@Percabeth Jackson 01

@Percabeth Jackson 01
like i said not complaining just confused thanks for the clarification keep up the good work

@Percabeth Jackson 01
like i said not complaining just confused thanks for the clarification keep up the good work

@Scottz657
That account was mine but it was w/ Gmail.. And the website doesn't support that log in anymore so I just made a new account and coppied the story. So I am not taking anyone's work. I know it's complicated.

I found this same story by someone else with the same name but without the 01 did they hand it over or did they lose thier account and make an alt i'm confused NOT complaining just want clarification

@NoisyAssassin03
This EXACTLY the criticism I needed/wanted. THANK YOU!!! And I'll try my best to make it a bit less choppy. I know this chapter isn't the best. I got MAJOR writers block.

i'm trying to help not be critical but you could make the story a little less choppy

i totally agree @percabeth jackson 01

@Morningstar.
If you don't like it, DON'T FREAKING READ IT! I have a zero percent tolerance level for BS readers. Good B Y E

i love this story plz continue

Gayy

I love this!!

I loved this story and am excited to read it again!