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@QuidditchPlayers
I hope you had a good 'sleep' if you know what I mean and I apologize again for making you angry but it's not me someone copied my name
I think that this is really cool. It's an awesome idea, and is full of useful do's and dont's. Great idea.
@Chelsea_Delos.
Oh my god. Wait. I'm laughing. Laurel just showed me what she wrote while ranting about it and swearing like a sailor. And why is it so funny? Laurel doesn't swear. No, seriously. She doesn't. And the fact that you were able to make her swear (probably also because it's 12:30 AM and she's tired as fuck)? Wow. I want to applaud you. Applaud you because I find this super funny and also because I'm kinda turned on right now because Laurel suddenly gets, like, 50x hotter when she swears. So later she's going to secretly thank you for getting her laid tonight. Good job.
@Chelsea_Delos.
Okay, hi. This is Laurel, the supposed nicer of the two. But did you just vote down our story? What for? To put us down? What point are you trying to prove? That you're bored and you think you're better than everyone here? Unlike you, we try to help people improve their characters and their stories. So if you can't provide any help whatsoever, I SUGGEST YOU GET THE FUCK OUT.
@Morningstar.
Well this "waste of space" actually helps people improve their stories and the thing you posted basically just told everyone not to write without giving constructive criticism. Which is the real waste of space? Are you really so bored that you're commenting on random people's stories just to say negative things with no basis?
May I recommend the differences in Greek and Roman personalities.
7/21/15