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DIVINE - Comments

@Lea Reclin

I love the twists and turns throughout the story, the way it has a sort of... rhythm. It is very well written, better than most other stories I have read, and I have always been a fan of this kind of writing, the sadder, more mysterious ones. This is a story that could pass the stats of even Seeking Happiness, I could see you getting that far.

@SpartanWarriorPercy
Wow! Thank you so much! That is very kind of you to say!
If it wouldn't be too much trouble would you mind getting into the specifics of what you like/dislike? At this point I have no idea how readers feels about the story's progression and it would be very helpful if I could get some in depth guidance!

Shelby Shelby
7/8/16

I... I have no words after reading this. It's an amazing story, full of action and adventure. with an amazing storyline. I wish I could write like you.

Well now I've lost my place cuz she deleted the entire thing... Oh well I'm too lazy to reread so bye ::/

Constrictor Constrictor
3/18/16

Ha

The Red Devil The Red Devil
1/31/16

Noooooooo! Shelby why?!?!

Constrictor Constrictor
1/31/16

No! what happened? this was my favorite story on this site!

CrazyGenius CrazyGenius
1/30/16

Totes awes

Whoa that is a pretty scary thing to wish for

Chelsea_Delos Chelsea_Delos
1/16/16

Luving the new chapter!!!

@Lea Reclin
Oh whoops, haha I was basing it off Tris XD but no problem! :D

Constrictor Constrictor
1/7/16

@Constrictor
Oh my gosh! those are too cute! Thank you so much!

(((side note: Lea is brunette))))

Shelby Shelby
1/7/16

Some more

Constrictor Constrictor
1/7/16

Hey I tried drawing fan art, but I'm not good at drawing XD;

Constrictor Constrictor
1/7/16

@Lea Reclin
Aw thanks. I love your story so much like its so relatable.

Constrictor Constrictor
12/28/15

@Chelsea_Delos
@Constrictor

Guys, as much as I adore you and appreciate you being there to back me up, I really don't think any attention should be paid to the troll. My only thought when I saw the comment was 'Oh my god, not this again' because it has absolutely no effect on me, but I know how it riles you all up. If these comments were more personal and vile, then maybe it'd be a problem, but the lack of effort on that person's end just isn't enough for me to feel any sort of emotion besides pity. So, once again thanks guys, you're lovely, and you're too good to put any effort into indulging him.

Shelby Shelby
12/28/15

@Chelsea_Delos
Thanks! I'm trying to break the mold of my usual writing and avoid the hero motif. So, I hope you don't mind Lea's moping around.

Shelby Shelby
12/28/15

((I wrote that I lots of comments to hide the bad comment))

Chelsea_Delos Chelsea_Delos
12/28/15

Like every chapter!

Chelsea_Delos Chelsea_Delos
12/28/15

Getting better and better

Chelsea_Delos Chelsea_Delos
12/28/15