Happily Ever After? I don't think so. - Comments, page 2

Love the new chapter

@Khalada Stone Series
Oh, thanks! it was made by Spooky Chelsea_Delos;)

Love the new chapter.

Cute cover btw

Nice Job

@J.K. Not Rowling
I could help

@SpookyBoo_
Thanks for another tip, I'll think about it. The thing is, I am always afraid someone will change my style of writting and the text won't feel like mine.

@Spooky Chelsea_Delos
Well, that would be great! The fanart that I used doesn't fit... That would be so nice of You<3

Love the new chapter, and if you wanted me too, I can make a banner for you?

Another great chapter :) though, I recommend sending your drafts to someone to edit before you post them, just to clean them up a little.

@SpookyBoo_
Thanks! Well I may have some mistakes and I'm really sorry for that. I'm just not American/ British (I would want to) so my grammar isn't as good as any other writter's.

Wow! This is really good, despite some obvious grammatical errors. Keep up the good work!

@SPOOKY Stop it Rick
I was writing on the computer, just disn't think about it. Thanks for the tip:)

Hey, this looks like it'll turn out to be pretty good! This is actually the fanfiction that's spurred me to make an account instead of just stalking a bunch of stuff like I've been doing for years. I hope the whole writing thing goes well for you!

(Also, nice name. I've shown it to several others and they all loved it!)

@J.K. Not Rowling
All goods! I love seeing new writers come through because sadly, old writers like me aren't going to be around forever :(

Welcome to the site! The username is great lol, and you're writing is great so far! If you're writing this on your phone it's ok, but maybe instead of capitalizing the 'SO' maybe italicize? Less yell more emphasis? If you're writing on a mobile device you don't have to change it, but I'm definately liking this so far!

Looking good so far!

@Spooky Chelsea_Delos
Thanks! Comments like this motivate me to write more. it's very nice of You. :)

Hello and welcome to the site! Hope that you have fun writing on here an reading other fanfics! Your story looks great already! Look forward to seeing more! :)