Truth or Dare- With a Twist - Comments, page 2

Lol great job!

Everyone is evil in their own right.

Omigod that last bit killed me XD

@the_rebellion

I understand your criticism, and I thank you for pointing out some of my own errors. And I know that as an author, I have to be able to deal with possible rude or critical comments in addition to nice ones. Also, I kind of wanted to bring out some of the more notorious qualities in the characters to kind of back up the game they are playing, and how mean it is going to get. Thank you again for the criticism, and I will try to word my next chapters better.

I don't think it's fair of you to ask people to be nice. By doing that you're cutting yourself off and asking only for positivity. As a writer, you must accept it all: kindness, harsh truth, and flat out rudeness.

I also don't think your characters match the way they're portrayed in the books. You're overdoing their minor yet notorious qualities, which may seem like the easy way out but is really just lazy writing.

Forgive me for being critical.

Thanks, I will definitely use some of them, as they are quite good. Thank you!

• Make Annabeth hold a jar with a MASSIVE spooder for the remainder of the game
• Leo sets Percy on fire
• Reyna hold hands with both Percy and Jason for a while
• Someone prank the Stolls
• Guys and girls switch clothes
• Hazel distorts the mist to make someone see something horrible

Give me some ideas please!