Is this real?
8
I woke up early and put on: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=93341918
I headed outside. I was sitting on the dock when Ryan found me.
"hey Jess." He pulled me in to his lap.I rested my head on his shoulder."Penny for your thoughts."
"I just have a bad feeling about today. That it. Also I'm worrying about Percy. He didn't return last night." He kissed my head.
"I bet he fine, Jess. This is your awesome cool older brother you are talking about. You're not the only one with a bad feeling about today. I'm feeling it. There a lot of tension in the air." We heard the dinning bell. We walked over holding hands. We ate. Then Annabeth yelled.
"EVERYONE TO THE BUSES. GRAB YOUR WEAPONS AND SHIELDS. PERCY NEEDS US AT THE EMPIRE BUILDING!!" We all ran off. Gathering supplies, weapons and making sure everyone was ready. I was the first one to come up with the first group. Ryan shortly came with a bunch of kids. We piled everyone in our trucks and buses. Annabeth got in the first truck. Ryan and me got in the second truck. We drove fast. We got there, It was really quiet for being New York. I ran to Percy. He saw doing a head count.
"Where the Ares cabin?"
"They refuse to come and help us Percy." I looked at him. Something was different about him. I don't know yet. I saw Nico. He looked guilt about something. Chiron and Harpies left us to defend New York. Percy sperate us by cabin to defend each bridged.
"Wait there one more bridge." Someone pointed out.
"Don't worry Seaweed brain. The hunters got it." A bunch of girls melted from trees. They were wearing silver. "Who this? You kinda look like a much better looking Percy." The girl with piercing blue eyes said to me. Ryan blocked me from her.
"I'm Percy sister, Jess."
"Really old seaweed brain had a daughter. Don't worry Fighter, I'm not going to take your little girl. How old are you?"
"15. Going to be 16 on the 20th." The girl looked me over. Then nodded.
"I'm Thalia, daughter of Zeus. Head of Artemis Hunters." I nodded at her.
"Everyone go. If you know Annabeth number and you need help, call us on some mortal phone then drop it. Jess do you have dad present still?"
"Of course." I showed him. He grab my hand."Good luck everyone." Everyone took off to their places. We ran to the river. On our way Annabeth set a couple of statues to defend New Your.
I headed outside. I was sitting on the dock when Ryan found me.
"hey Jess." He pulled me in to his lap.I rested my head on his shoulder."Penny for your thoughts."
"I just have a bad feeling about today. That it. Also I'm worrying about Percy. He didn't return last night." He kissed my head.
"I bet he fine, Jess. This is your awesome cool older brother you are talking about. You're not the only one with a bad feeling about today. I'm feeling it. There a lot of tension in the air." We heard the dinning bell. We walked over holding hands. We ate. Then Annabeth yelled.
"EVERYONE TO THE BUSES. GRAB YOUR WEAPONS AND SHIELDS. PERCY NEEDS US AT THE EMPIRE BUILDING!!" We all ran off. Gathering supplies, weapons and making sure everyone was ready. I was the first one to come up with the first group. Ryan shortly came with a bunch of kids. We piled everyone in our trucks and buses. Annabeth got in the first truck. Ryan and me got in the second truck. We drove fast. We got there, It was really quiet for being New York. I ran to Percy. He saw doing a head count.
"Where the Ares cabin?"
"They refuse to come and help us Percy." I looked at him. Something was different about him. I don't know yet. I saw Nico. He looked guilt about something. Chiron and Harpies left us to defend New York. Percy sperate us by cabin to defend each bridged.
"Wait there one more bridge." Someone pointed out.
"Don't worry Seaweed brain. The hunters got it." A bunch of girls melted from trees. They were wearing silver. "Who this? You kinda look like a much better looking Percy." The girl with piercing blue eyes said to me. Ryan blocked me from her.
"I'm Percy sister, Jess."
"Really old seaweed brain had a daughter. Don't worry Fighter, I'm not going to take your little girl. How old are you?"
"15. Going to be 16 on the 20th." The girl looked me over. Then nodded.
"I'm Thalia, daughter of Zeus. Head of Artemis Hunters." I nodded at her.
"Everyone go. If you know Annabeth number and you need help, call us on some mortal phone then drop it. Jess do you have dad present still?"
"Of course." I showed him. He grab my hand."Good luck everyone." Everyone took off to their places. We ran to the river. On our way Annabeth set a couple of statues to defend New Your.
(This is a comment on chapter seven) Nothign I'd misspelled, but some sentences just make zero sense or have a typo
7/4/16