Nico the second god of the underworld!

Umm well I'm bad at grammar too but I'm going to give you a couple tips;
:make this longer
:commas
:I'll do a example


After the death of Nico's sister, he has been felling lonely!
Hades has asked Nico to become the second god of the underworld....which shows Hades loved Nico's sister!
Who knew Hades loved his children?
Or was there something else......?

dude its hades not hadez