Two Bodies, One Soul

I finally found my glasses so I've gone over the whole story and checked my spelling, grammar, etc.

Please comment and tell me what you think. It only takes a few seconds of your time and it can make my day and inspire me to write even more for you to read.

Again, do not worry about me killing off main characters, I changed tact so all the characters that I bothered to list under characters will be alive at the end of the story, I promise you that.

So please comment, it makes my day! Even criticism is welcome!

Please rate my story honestly, I love it when my stats go up! It lets me know people are still listening.

Don't forget to subscribe when you've gotten to the end, because until I say 'happily ever after' you can know that there'll always be more to come. And everyone knows demigods never get to hear those words at the end of their stories...

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