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Reality Check Please

Dark and Beutiful

"Hello I'm Nico" the boy said. I sat there on my ass in awe and he chuckled. It was and melodius and beutiful thing and I wished he would do it again. "I got to get to camp or I'm dead so come on"he said as he pulled me of the ground. He was strong and muscular.... and cute. I couldn't believe how fast I had fallen for him and how hard. When what he had said fully registered I shook myself out of it and replied "I can't go I have to stay with my mom, you don't know how worried she can get. She is probably freaking out right this fucking second." You're ADHD aren't you,and Dyslexic." " Ya but that can happen to any body I was born with it." " One of your parnets was never there after you were born" he said surely. " Ya" I replied " but what does that have to do with the fact that I have to be home right now, not traipsing off to some camp" I said snarkley. "Come on let's go" he said, and before I could answer he pulled me in close and ran through an shadow.

Notes

Sorry for the short chapters but I don't have a huge amount of time so as soon as I get time I will make longer chapters. This is my first storie so please comment and tell me anything I could improve on. Thanks for reading!— Elise aka sportynerd

Comments

Thanks but I don't know how to post a cover picture

sportynerd sportynerd
2/22/14

Really good! Work on spelling and it's awesome. Also, to keep people reading, add a cover picture and keep posting chapters. I'll try to get it out there.

Percy. Percy.
2/22/14

Please comment I need feed back so I can make it better!

sportynerd sportynerd
2/21/14