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Reality Check Please

Arrival

I felt like I was going to puke. Every thing went dark and I heard screaming, it scared me. Nico noticed and pulled me closer. My did a little flip flop and I snuggled in. Then all to soon it was over, and we arrived at the top of a hill.I looked around and saw kids from five to college age runing around, swordfighting, and playing volleyball. " Welcome to Camp-Halfblood" said Nico. "Half what" I questioned. " Half human and half olympian" " like, the olympics" I said. "No like the greek gods" Nico said. "Um they aren't real" "Yes they are and one of them is your father" Nico said."Fine then which one is your parent" "Hades" he said coldly. I decided not to ask any more. "Come on let's get you down to the big house" he said. As we walked kids, no matter the age, avoided us and whispered to each other. I ignored them which wasn't hard for me considering this happened at school to me a lot. As we arived I saw two men play a card game, one of them was in a wheel chair with a blanket on his lap and the other was wearing a leapord print sweatsuit. As we got closer they noticed us and the one in the leapord print suit got a panicked look on his face. When we got there he simply said "You cant be alive."

Notes

Thank you zues for commenting and giving me tips if you want new charecters just send me their names parents age personality and good or evil. Thanks for reading- elise aka sportynerd

Comments

Thanks but I don't know how to post a cover picture

sportynerd sportynerd
2/22/14

Really good! Work on spelling and it's awesome. Also, to keep people reading, add a cover picture and keep posting chapters. I'll try to get it out there.

Percy. Percy.
2/22/14

Please comment I need feed back so I can make it better!

sportynerd sportynerd
2/21/14