Help Corner!
Introduction
Hello Demigods!
Elizarush here! You may know me as the writer for "The First Daughter" or the lesser known story "I loved a god of War" but as t turns out for right now I can't update those stories as quickly as I could before! :/
I KNOW it's terrible! DX
But I thought in the meantime while I am still working on those stories I will begin with a Help Corner so in saying that this is what this is going to entail:
* I will be doing reviews
If you are interested for me to do one for you message me and I'll get to work on it!
*Now when I say when I'm doing a review please note that I will be stating my opinion please don't take it personal!
*Here's the list of things I will be looking at:
1. Plot. Duh!
2. How the story flows (ex. is it easy to follow or is it too fast or slow?)
3. Grammar is a big deal but I won't bash up your face and deduct points (we all make mistakes and some typos it's ok!)
4. Characters (are they practically all the same? and if you have PJO characters: did you do them justice?)
5: Description (can i see what you see?)
Now here's the deal if you take me on I will state the pros and cons of the story and I will also have suggestions for each con if I have one. I do maintain a positive attitude, and my goal is to NOT discourage you but rather encourage you to better and produce an awesome story for everyone to read!
So that is that please message me if you are interested! (I don't bite :D )
Happy Writing,
Elizarush
Can you please review my fanfiction "Will of the Gods"? It is not fully completed yet so please take that into consideration. Thanks!
12/15/19