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Help Corner!

Introduction

Hello Demigods!

Elizarush here! You may know me as the writer for "The First Daughter" or the lesser known story "I loved a god of War" but as t turns out for right now I can't update those stories as quickly as I could before! :/

I KNOW it's terrible! DX

But I thought in the meantime while I am still working on those stories I will begin with a Help Corner so in saying that this is what this is going to entail:

* I will be doing reviews
If you are interested for me to do one for you message me and I'll get to work on it!
*Now when I say when I'm doing a review please note that I will be stating my opinion please don't take it personal!

*Here's the list of things I will be looking at:
1. Plot. Duh!
2. How the story flows (ex. is it easy to follow or is it too fast or slow?)
3. Grammar is a big deal but I won't bash up your face and deduct points (we all make mistakes and some typos it's ok!)
4. Characters (are they practically all the same? and if you have PJO characters: did you do them justice?)
5: Description (can i see what you see?)

Now here's the deal if you take me on I will state the pros and cons of the story and I will also have suggestions for each con if I have one. I do maintain a positive attitude, and my goal is to NOT discourage you but rather encourage you to better and produce an awesome story for everyone to read!

So that is that please message me if you are interested! (I don't bite :D )

Happy Writing,

Elizarush



Notes

Comments

Can you please review my fanfiction "Will of the Gods"? It is not fully completed yet so please take that into consideration. Thanks!

who was i again who was i again
12/15/19

@Eliza Rush
Please reviwe my fanfic: The Lost Goddess!

RunningGodling3 RunningGodling3
5/15/15

@Eliza Rush
Alright then, let's begin with the first one: Rise of the Night!

Shelby Shelby
1/1/15

@The Knight of the Gods

please just limit to one story at a time please!

Eliza Rush Eliza Rush
1/1/15

Hey! Can you review my story "Eternal Warrior " and provide feed back If you like it, if you think others will like it, etc.How to improvise and where to.

Sons Of Anarchy Sons Of Anarchy
12/29/14