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Three words,

AWE SOME NESS!

Technically that's one word but I'm the boss here lol XD.
So this story is very new and there is only two chapters but I absolutely love it! Once I finish this story I'm going to subscribe and vote on it!
Gosh this is an amazing even though it only has two chapters the story sucks you in so quickly!
The character development is amazing!
And along with every chapter so far, the author has put a song up for a soundtrack for that chapter!
Also I have found another TFK fan!

So for so far in this story I'm going to give this 8.5! Congratulations Nikole you deserve it!


Suggestions (would be spoilers i guess):

I am happy to say that I do not have a lot of suggestions other than continue writing!

I noticed that you have 2500 word goal: STOP THAT IMMEDIATELY!
Having a firm concrete word goal is a recipe for writers block, and it'll do more harm than good. Instead have a plot goal for each chapter, like chapter one: this thing happens chapter two: next thing happens. And it's ok to have to have short chapters I've read some that serve the purpose of a plot and it be half a page long, it gives the reader a bit of a break lol :)

That is all my friend

Signing Off,

~Eliza Rush

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