Help Corner!

So my readers I'm skipping the review today and going straight the suggestions. :)


Whoo! Go Stop It Rick I have a few suggestions and then you'll be on your way!

Loving the characters! Work little on their characters like likes, dislikes, fears and such and such. It's pretty easy to find character sheets, but if you need help let me know and I'll find a, "Eliza Rush Approved Character Sheet". Love the fact that you put in there that Selina doesn't have powers and such. (it's different and I LOVE it!)
Also side note: Why would Percy call Mary Sue, maybe instead have he wanting to call her parents but she intercepts the call.

Another thing: You make Piper to be a typical Aphrodite kid, which she's not, so I suggest that you read the books again to get a feel for her character.


I also suggest working on plot a little more: You skipped the part where Selina and Sammy get to meet the other two and the chapters after are very confusing. The confusing part can be remedied by being more descriptive: A tick I use us that my book is a movie and I have explain things like it is.


When you have gone further and edited I'll be happy to come back and do a whole review thing for you, but until then this is all I have for you! If you have any questions or comments please message me directly!

~Eliza Rush


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