MY CRITICISM:

For Me it takes a little too long to find out what the plot is?

I Really prefer it when people write fan fic thats more realistic {the Zeus daughter thing }

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NON CRITICISM:

I like that your going in the right direction in writing

I like the style of writing you used

I like the way you described your characters

This Story has Very Descriptive writing,

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I rate this Story 8/10

Notes

I am looking through Comments and reviewng them again.


~Nisha