Percabeth not happening? I'm not judging but


ANYWAYS...


It is a great

1. Story
2. plot
3. characters

But when you write or type conversations try it this way

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"Hey do not bring that up again, just because I got dumped ONCE doesn't mean that you now are better than me Mr. I Got A Girlfriend And You Don't"

"Hey, hey, hey, calm down man listen I became friends with you at hell, also known as our high school, because you were in need of one, and I also understood you. Maybe you need to be involved with things that she likes" Grover answered

"Yeah well I tried that, I signed up for every one of her classes and talk to her everyday--"

"YOU WHAT NOW?? Now that's the problem, she probably thinks your a hot stalker guy, if I know any demigod, she probably is insecure and tries to blend in, so a guy like you talking to her probably makes her think that it is a joke."

"Ok thanks Lover Doctor, hahaha wish me luck, see yea later bro" I said quickly right before I swished my hand through the Mist, ending the call. But I was too late, just as I turned around, thinking that since classes were in session no one was around, found that I was wrong. Standing there, right in front of me was Madison, staring at me like I was crazy...then before I could explain myself, she quickly ran away.

Just my luck I thought

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This Story I rate 8-10

Notes

Sorry If Emma didn't do a review on this


~ Nisha