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How do we get along so well?

Summary

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read the 1st chapter I'm not good at descriptions

Characters

adriana halza

adriana halza

daughter of athena ,likes seth,shy around strangers, ooutgoing around friends

bells

bells

short ,daughter of aphrodite ,dark brown hair, mexican ,brown eyes ,glasses, doesnt wear make up doesnt stand up for herself

cole

cole

son of ares, pervert, mean to sophy

seth johnson

seth johnson

son of ares, likes adriana

sophy

sophy

tall, daughter of ares,dirty blond hair,glasses, hazel eyes,wears make up, mess with her shell teach u a lesson,mess with her friends (especially bells)ur dead

Chapters

  1. wake up call

    POV: sophy

  2. breakfast at the pavilion

    POV:bells

  3. authors note

  4. breakfast at the pavilion:2

    sophy

  5. DREAMS

    seth *deviously sophie chapter(thats me)*

  6. a/n

    authors note

Comments

@iluvpercyjackson!
Urgh, me too. And every time I try to type fast it just goes something along the lines of: hekko how ate yip? :(

yhfgc yhfgc
5/25/14

@MountainEchoes

yep plus i'm a really slow typer D:

iluvpercyjackson! iluvpercyjackson!
5/25/14

@iluvpercyjackson!
Oh, alright then, my mistake :) You can just fix it once you do have time, so the story will be easier to read.

yhfgc yhfgc
5/25/14

@MountainEchoes

i know how to do that, i just have a reallt tight schedule

iluvpercyjackson! iluvpercyjackson!
5/25/14

I have only read one chapter so far, but make sure to do/know these things when writing. Because I'm sure you'd be an amazing author if you did.
- War and Love usually go hand in hand. Aphrodite's and Ares' relationship is great. I would not call them opposites.
- Remember these [,] and BIG letters after dot [.] I don't know what it's called in english and when you say I(i - as in me). (Fx. I had gotten a medal for […], and I was so happy about it. I jumped in glee.) etc.

Those are the main things. But keep going and keep writing and you'll become better and better :).

yhfgc yhfgc
5/24/14
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