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Okay, so when I heard the creepy voice, I was freaked out of my mind, but somehow, I knew I knew that voice. Erm... That sounds weird. You probably get what I mean. I stammered, "I... I know that voice."

A girl next to me stared. "What?" Her hair was bright red, and her face was dotted with freckles.

"I don't know how... I just... do." I cocked my head. This girl looked familiar...

A face loomed from the clouds. I gasped. "What now?" Red-head said. Hey... That rhymes!

"I know that person. He's... He's..." I shook my head. "I can't place his name."

The person said, "Boo." Everything went chaotic. I think someone ripped my pants, because later there was a rip all the way from the knee to the ankle.

"RACHEL!!!" Someone was yelling. "RACHEL!!! A PROPHECY WOULD BE HELPFUL RIGHT NOW!!!"

Red-head looked around wildly. "No! A prophecy wouldn't help right now!"

"Rachel... The oracle? Are you Rachel?" I asked Red-head.

"Yeah." She answered.

I looked her up and down. Wow... she was beautiful. Her hair was frizzy, a little over shoulder length, and her eyes were a piercing green. Her face was dotted with freckles, like someone splattered brown paint on her face. (Later I learned that she actually could've had paint on her face.)

I shook my head. "What now?" The face had dissipated back into the clouds. Then I heard a loud thumping noise. "Wh-wh-wh-what's-ss-ss-ss th-th-th-that-t-t n-n-oi-oi-oise-ss-ss?" I asked, my voice trembling in rhythm with the ground.

A girl with long black hair, with what looked like natural white stripes in it, said, "N-n-no!! I-i-i-it c-c-can't-t-t b-b-be!!"

A black shadow, more then twice the size of the really big pine tree, stepped over that same tree in one step. (Later, I learned it was called Thalia's pine tree.)

I heard it beckoning, "Come, my half-bloods... Come, and maybe I won't hurt you."

Fat chance, I thought.

The shadow turned toward me, but before I saw his face, someone slammed into me, and I was knocked out.

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