Son of Two
My sword is an X-men
We get in line for dinner and enter the dining Pavilion and we sacrifice some of our food to the gods and I gave up a rib for my dad and some veggies for my mom and go and sit down when Chiron announces'' Eat your belly's full for tonight is Capture the Flag !'' The crowed erupts in cheers and then he said '' I would also like to welcome our new camper John Burlock.''
Afterward we started to eat when Leo says ''OK we have an alliance with the Apollo,Hecate , Nemesis, Ares, and Hades cabins. John I want you on the right flank with the Hecate cabin so we can see if we can tap into some of those abilities because I think that thing with the fire in the forges was you.'' So we ate dinner and talked battle plans then went and started getting ready for capture the flag. Some of the Apollo kids helped me with my armor when Vanessa cam up to me and said '' So hows it going?''
''Good made a sword out of fire and some bronze with powers I do not know how to use but good'' I said.
''Well see you out there and I hope you figure that power out'' she said and then she ran off.
We set up for capture the flag capture the flag and then a conch horn was blown and the game was off. We were running when I saw a kid pull water up from a creek and punch the kid with water and sent him back ten feet. He then saw me drew a sword and ran towards me I ducked his first swing then drew my sword. He slashed at me and i blocked with my sword. I tried to hit him with .a down ward stroke but he dodged ,He tried slash at me but it bounced of my very long scabbard I attacked his flank with my sword. He lifted his sword to block me but instead it passed through like the x-men Kitty Pride. The sword cut through the armor and simultaneously burned it as if it was still in fire form. Then a blonde girl screamed and hit me in the head with the flat side of a sword that looked like a very large bone. Then I blacked out.
This is really good! Just work on quotation like a previous comment said and you'll be good! This story reminded me of mine which is called Daughter of Two. XD Not the story but the part about the demigod of two gods. that pretty much it.
7/17/14