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A New Hero

A New Quest

It was day so we got our supplies such as food, drachmas and clothes so me, Percy, and Thalia made our way to the docks. We had to get on a boat because Percy hated flying because of Zeus. It was going to be a long ride to Rome so we relaxed a little me and Percy shared a room luckily we had a bigger bed.
It was still a little early so we made some plans for when we get there "How will we get the gorgons blood? " I asked "if I remember correctly they were at a store called the Bargain Mart about hundred miles away from were we will land" Percy said "We will have a long walk tomorrow we should eat and get some rest" Thalia said with a sad look. So while we were eating we did not really say anything so me and Percy went to bed against each other my head was against his chest and I could hear his heartbeat and him snoring.
When I woke up it was really bright outside and Percy was up and ready "Ready to go? We already landed" he said with a smile. I got ready and we walked while until the sunset then we set up camp in the middle of a field with no one around. Then something happened we got a iris message from Chiron "Percy, Annabeth, and Thalia we have a problem" he said worried "We were attacked they took some people including Nathan" Thalia looked worried "What Happened?" Percy asked "We were attacked by demigod but they hit us hard and Percy and Annabeth may I talk to Thalia alone?" Chiron said worryingly. So me and Percy walked a ways I turned to him and he hugged me then kissed me on the head "Its okay we will find them and we will help camp" he said softly then we heard a scream from Thalia so we ran over and she was gone.

Notes

Sorry if it was boringand next one will hopefully be bett

Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14