A New Hero - Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

@SadieKane
You are good thank you I owe you one.

@The Lost hero
Oh I just did

I spoke too soon.

@SadieKane
if you cant get a picture for Nathan it is fine.

@The Lost hero
:)

@SadieKane
Looks nice thank y

@The Lost hero
Ok

@SadieKane
I dont want to like overboard you because I know you have a lot of stories so I will right this one so you can update yours and have fun with them so yay and thank you for helping me.

@The Lost hero
Oh ya

@SadieKane
If you could help with pictures because as you could see I dont have

@The Lost hero
Oh sure I would love too just tell me what you want me to do

@SadieKane
I was wondering If you could help with my story you dont have too but it would help.

@The Lost hero
Nice I will have. To remember that

@SadieKane
You know you really don't need a lot of people to comment on your story you just need one like you.

@The Lost hero
No thank you