A New Hero - Comments, page 2

@SadieKane
Thank you and you are always so nice so thank you.

Like it keep going

@The Lost hero
For the story, no, but for your writing technique, yes. Be yourself and trust your instincts, and keep your thoughts organized, on paper perhaps. I have a bulging journal full of my writing: Vocab, fanfic excerpts, thoughts, notes on books, everything! What I'm trying to say is this: be organized, and keep your writing organized. Learn what you used in English class, because, believe it or not, it actually helps, a lot! Sentence structure and puctuation and all that are what make up a lot of one's story. Do what you want and be free. The world is a notebook and your are a pen. Make your mark and and, remember, have fun! :)

@the_fourth_fate
Thank you I will update soon. Do you have any suggestions?

Love it! :)

Give me new ideas for next chapter please

Wow still like it

Love it

Like it

I will try my best to fix it

It is good though you still need to fix the problem

@The Ghost King
no problem :)

Please tell people about this story it will help me gain more confidence about my writing and thank you for helping me.

@The Ghost King
I see it works now:)

@The Ghost King
Ok I have not had that problem I know it doesn't do tab but I hit enter and then tab. I also write it somewhere else then copy and last but....

@SadieKane I do indent but it does not work for some reason if you can help please do.

Like the new chapter again guess I have to come up with better things to say. Though for all my teachers I have to say when you start some one new talking you have to indent or in this case go down another line

Like the new chapter

Sorry I messed up a little hope you still enjoy and I am writing two stories a new hero and freedom comes with a price which one you want to see more of please tell.

Still like it