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A New Hero

The Ambush

It was a good day Josef was doing good and I was happy because I was going to see Annabeth because I have not seen her in a while I was also bringing Josef. When I got to her and her fake boyfriend Sam apartment but I noticed something felt weird but I knocked on the door and Sam answered "What do you want?" I just looked at him but then Annabeth walked up "Percy I am so glad to see you!" Thats when Sam walked off so I looked at Annabeth and mouthed thank you. I got Josef out and set him down beside Annabeth "He has gotten a lot bigger since I last saw him" she said with delight "I know he is about five months now and I am so glad to see after three weeks" she smiled and I went in for a kiss but she stopped me "We can't kiss because of Sam" she then looked sad and sighed. Then someone knocked on the door "Are you expecting anyone else?" Sam asked but Annabeth just shook her head Sam opened the door then he fell to the floor then I got up and saw him it was Nathan "Hello".
Josef was crying and me, Annabeth, and Sam was on the floor tied up "Can we make that baby shut up" a fimilare voice said and he came in it was Dr. Thorn the two colored eye manticore "Shut up Thorn" Nathan snapped then he looked at us "So Percy and Annabeth Jackson the two greatest demigods in a century" he said then Sam started talking "Wait you and Percy are siblings?" He asked with his stupid look then Annabeth just looked at him "No, me and Percy are married and Josef is our son" Annabeth said with confidence "I would love to chat but we have some business to attend to" Nathan said "Julius attack!" Nathan yelled to his big pet wolf that I surprisingly did not noticed but it did not attack us it attacked Thorn and it made him turned to dust then Nathan cut us loose then Annabeth grabbed Josef "Come on and hurry!" Nathan

Notes

Thanks for reading.

Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14