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Honour and sacrifice

Summary

You have 9 days. Death is unleashed through the demigod world and it is up to only four heroes to save it. Will they fail or thrive? The answer is in the story you see before you.

Chapters

  1. Death unleashed

    Find out who is telling the story in the story

  2. Intro- dont find it boring please

    Find out who is telling the story-again

  3. The characters

    Information you might need to know

  4. Battle #2

    Ben's POV

Comments

@Constrictor
Sorry I kinda thought about the "one second knocked out and the next fighting" I doesn't seem so realistic:)

Olympus through time Olympus through time
2/24/15

Nice idea, :) you have a good flow to things. However, I find it confusing how everything plays out. You kept switching point of views and one second Ben was knocked out and the next he was fighting again. It certainly seems exciting, but I just had to recommend that. It's kind of confusing to understand what is happening, so try re-reading it and adding more details. But good job on the story. xD

Constrictor Constrictor
2/24/15

Please write comments or suggestions:)

Olympus through time Olympus through time
2/24/15
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