Two Demigods, Seven Years: Book One

Hi. So, a 7.0? So, one of you could vote, but not comment? It isn't that I'm not cool with the rating, well, quite honestly I think this story in particular deserves a better one, but I'm not really upset. But please, if you are going to give my story a cruddy rating, surely you can comment with constructive criticism? Like, really? Frankly, I find it a bit rude to give someone a bad rating and not give advice on how to make a story better! Now, if you're a person who gave the story a good rating and didn't comment, why are you still reading this? I have no problem with you! Because really, all I want is a bad rating and a message or comment with some advice on how to fix what you don't like! I was originally going to write this to tell you all that there is no need to tell me what house you think Rita should be in, I made my choice while in deep thought after I finished my exams today and still had nearly an hour left to work on it, but it was the Language Arts exam and that happens to be best subject, so I wasn't very worried after I look through my test booklet. Also with my exams, which I didn't bother telling any of you about because I tried not to let it interfere with updating, I play percussion, as you would know if you only read the top part of my profile, and in trying to get to the set, I tripped over a music stand in the trumpet area and fell into the front of a base drum, which, if you have ever seen one, you can conclude would be quite painful. I hit my collarbone, which may or may not be busted, and my head, then later, I walked over a highlighter which stuck in the groove of my combat boot, spun, and I fell backwards next to a chair and now my shin and knee (right leg, left collarbone, by the way) and got two super-sized paper cuts putting my math homework into my folder. So. As you can see, I did not have the best day, so honestly, just please comment or whatever and stuff. Also, why have none of you commented anyway? Just a thought......
my folder.

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Peace, love, and Nico di Angelo

-Emily