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Darkness Reveals

I Get Kidnapped

“No! I’m not leaving!” I yell.

“Yes! You! Are!” he yells in between blows.

I put my hand out in front of me for some reason. I don’t even know why. It just feels right. I close my eyes and focus.

All sound disappears. I feel pressure in my head, and ears. I can breathe; I tumble to the ground.

Am I dead? I can feel my heart beating. Very slowly. Thud. Thud. Thud.

I feel cold hands slide under me; whoever it is, picks me up bridal style. I know it isn’t Trey. His hands are warm, and welcoming. These ones defiantly aren't. They feel like ice dipped in snow. I shiver.

I try to break free but I can't move a muscle. It's to hard: I'm exhausted. I can't even open my eyes to see or mouth to talk. All my muscles are tense and feel like they are on fire.

Trey’s POV

So stubborn. I only get a few blows in before the whole thing is swallowed into a shadow. And when I say swallowed– I mean it. A huge black hand-shadow thing just came out of the ground. It’s gone.

I turn around to see Camryn on the ground with a man standing over her. Her eyes are closed, and her skin has been drained of the tan color that once was there. She isn't moving, and I think she is breathing.

The man overtop of her has pale skin, white hair, a scruffy white beard-but only on his chin, he has wrinkles all over like an english bulldog, and seems to radiate power.

He picks her up bridal style.

“Hey! Get away from her!” I shout running towards him, sword in hand.

He puts forth his arm; I fly backwards, and land hard on my back.

“Put her down! Now! I don't care if you are a god, demigod sent from the camp! Don't touch her! She’s not in any trouble!” I regret the last thing because there was just a cyclops sitting here.

“Not in any trouble you say . . .” the guy says quietly. “What do you call that?!” he shouts pointing to where the cyclops was.

I hesitate, “Still! She’s fine here! Tell the camp she's fine!”

“I’m not here on behalf of Camp Half- Blood.” . . . "Now go to sleep,” he says softly.

I feel myself slowing down. My muscles relax and feel like jelly. My knees and ankles buckle from underneath me. My eyelids start to feel droopy, and I fall onto my back from my hands and knees. I close my eyes. No! I will not! I try to open them but it's useless. I'm just . . . to . . . to . . . to tired.

Camryn’s POV

“You too,” says the voice of the man holding me.

My muscles relax, and return to their normal state. My mind goes blank, and I drift off to a blissful sleep.

I awake on a soft surface with an oversized black v-neck over my bikini top. The pain in my muscles in nothing compared to the migraine I have right now.

I breath in the smell of lavender and vanilla. I open my curious eyes to see what looks mostly like a library. There are tall wooden bookshelves on both of the far walls, and they wrap around the main wall where their is a marble fire place which has a warm fire glowing in it. In front of the crackling fire, there are two leather arm air chairs with a wooded nightstand in between them that has a few candles burning on them. That's probably where the lavender and vanilla scents are coming from. In front of the two chairs is a black shagged rug. The couch I'm laying on is made of soft black silk. Behind me on a desk is a picture of my house, and myself. Their are pictures of my family too. Trey, Devyn, and my mom(Lauren) are all there. The desk has papers and pencils everywhere. As I look closer, I can see my school schedule, and other schedule too. It looks like one of those desks in a cop show where they are after a bad guy and set up every known location, friend, everything on one wall. What the heck is this?

I swing my legs over the side of the couch. The dark polished wood floor is cold to the touch which is weird if you ask me because wood isn't a conductor. I try standing up, but lose my balance and sink back down into the couch. I try getting up once more, and make my way over to the desk slowly. I feel light headed, and sway my head back a forth then focus on the desk. They have everything from a copy of Lauren's bills to a copy of my repot card which isn't very good but that's not important right now.

I think about how I got here; I remember running to the lake then turning around to go see where Trey was. Then I saw the cyclops which isn't supposed to exist. All I can remember is collapsing, and hearing Trey's voice say something. I forgot; then some guy picked me up, and did something to Trey, and put me to sleep. Now I'm here.

I look around for a door, and see tall double doors that curve at the top; they look like old viking doors that they kept in their dining halls. I make my way over to them and try pulling on the rings that are supposed to act as door handles. I try pushing too, but nothing works.

"That door won't open if you are wondering," says a man's voice.

I spin around quickly, perhaps too quickly. I catch myself on the door, so I won't fall.

“Careful killer, you were out for a week. That spell Morpheus put on you worked too well,” he says.

Morpheus is the god of dreams right? I think I'm coming to the conclusion that this greek stuff is real or I'm going crazy.

Wait a second; how did he even get in here? I was standing in front of the door the whole time.

I look at the person who I guess I can call my captor is kind of cute, but not my type. I don't like guys; they're too unreliable. He looks about twenty years old with defined facial features. His eyes look black, but they aren't. They are just a really deep blue. His hair is dirty blondish but I think it’s more brown. My head only comes up to his chest which means he's tall obviously. He looks like a bodybuilder from Fittea magazine meaning he is muscular. He has on all black clothing which isn’t bad, but I mean a little color never hurt anything.

I lock my eyes with his and glare at him, "How did you get in here?"

"It's called shadow traveling; pretty cool right?" he answers looking at the desk.

"I don't care about 'shadow traveling' or whatever. I want to go home!" I say pounding a fist on the door.

"But you are home Camryn; your real home," he answers.

"What are you talking about?"

"Your smart. Figure it out," he sneers. "You belong here with your father."

Notes

Hi!!! I redid this chapter and the third so..

-A>D>R :P



Comments

@Constrictor
Oh, thanks. Sorry if she does sound OP but she was even more before I rewrote the story. I love your new story! It sounds awesome!

A.D.R. A.D.R.
1/14/16

@A.D.R.
Haha sorry for sounding rude, that tends to happen in school. A Mary Sue is a name for a character who is OP or Over-Powered. Now I was just thinking that, because I'm very nit-picky, but I love the story!

Constrictor Constrictor
1/14/16

@Constrictor
Thanks for the feedback. May I ask, what is a Mary Sue or who is it?

A.D.R. A.D.R.
1/14/16

I don't mean to sound rude, but this character is starting to sound like an Mary Sue. Scar across right eye? Daughter of the big three? Charm that she wouldn't get attacked by monsters?

Constrictor Constrictor
1/14/16

I love it!

Chelsea_Delos Chelsea_Delos
1/14/16