Darkness Reveals - Comments

@Constrictor
Oh, thanks. Sorry if she does sound OP but she was even more before I rewrote the story. I love your new story! It sounds awesome!

@A.D.R.
Haha sorry for sounding rude, that tends to happen in school. A Mary Sue is a name for a character who is OP or Over-Powered. Now I was just thinking that, because I'm very nit-picky, but I love the story!

@Constrictor
Thanks for the feedback. May I ask, what is a Mary Sue or who is it?

I don't mean to sound rude, but this character is starting to sound like an Mary Sue. Scar across right eye? Daughter of the big three? Charm that she wouldn't get attacked by monsters?

I love it!

awwww

On October 29, 2005 I was only 1 years old sheesh

Congrats on winning an Award! You definitely deserved it!

Great Writing !!! :)
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@A.D.R.
Omg fan girling right now

All will be revealed in time...

@Sis of Leo Valdez

Hay great story....
just wondering where are tyson and clairese at?

I love this so much!

Yay new chapter!!!!!plz another

I updated
@GirlsRulebutPercyRulesMore

Ha ha Chrion just got told. Anyways. UPDATE!!!

yes, i know

@A.D.R.
On the comment, this is dumb by @Chelsea_Delos.

what?
@Chelsea_Delos

Notice the dot, it's not me