Darkness Reveals - Comments, page 2

My gosh I love the story so much

i love this story so much omg

This is dumb

@Protaokper
@QuidditchPlayers
Just enjoy the story and stop complaining just focus on the bit that's going on now the past bit dosn't really matter

@GirlsRulebutPercyRulesMore
I agree with @Protaokper. She's 3. Girl probably still wets the bed. Being a demigod doesn't excuse that. Heck, Annabeth ran away when she was 7 and probably wouldn't have gone far if it hadn't been for Luke and Thalia. Also, running away from home is such a cliche.

@GirlsRulebutPercyRulesMore
Yeah, that's not the only reason. She's three. She can't fucking run away for 9 years without being raped or mugged or killed in that period. Shit fucking happens.

@Protaokper
What if you make a scenario in which she is an uber-smart genius but is to much of a demigod to be able to dhow it all the way, or you could make a different one. My resolution (doesn't have to be yours im just using my opinion in this even though it's not my business. ) was that she was a super genius. So ya... just think about that. Or you can make up another reason. Yours truly
@GirlRulebutPercyRulesMore

@Protaokper
Well, if it doesn't make sense to you, don't read it.

@A.D.R.
OMFG there is NO goddamn reason for her to be three! It doesn't even make SENSE!!

Yes.
@Protaokper

She was three and she f*cking ran away?

its a good story

really like the new chapters keep up the good work

I like it!

@A.D.R.
Hay im not very good at gamma and punctuation aswell i only just got an account and started writing haha ur all good

@Sis of Leo valdez
i know about the fake morningstar, and I'm gonna write more.
ps- excuse my laziness for grammar/ punctuation

i love this story hope u wright more

hay don't worry about morningstar. its a fake the real morningstar is a fantastic writer

I love the story I also just realized I forgot to subscribe lol. Anyway update plz

Terrible