There's Nowhere I Can Hide
Summary
something is hidding inside of nathan,something dark and mysterious. This thing wants to kill him but what can he do to get it out? we dont know but now.. all he has is time.
Characters
Nathan
Fith cohort member UNCLAIMED for now
Noah
Fith cohort member son of pluto
Octavian
first cohort centurion
Reyna
preator of camp jupiter daughter of bellona
Okay, the plots good but work on spelling and punctuation. Capitalize each word after a period. Always check you spelling, other then that, I like it! Write more chapters!
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