Life Sucks
Night at the Hospital
Tim pov
I hold the unconscious woman's hand. Glass shards stick out of her forehead.
"Maria! How's the boy?"
"He's barely surviving!"
"These two seemed close! Pray he makes it!" She nods and I continue running down the hall. I push open the doors to the emergency room.
"Give her some pain killers! Numb her forehead!" I shout orders, while her pulse gets steadier.
"Get her some x-Rays! Do something!" I look at her and notice her wedding ring. I take a deep breath and run to see the boy.
"Maria, how is he?"
"Pray," she says solemnly.
"Let him survive a few more hours please! He and the girl are married." I turn and leave the room, looking at my own wedding ring.
Percy pov
I see her. She's beautiful all in white, running to me. I smile and she hits a barrier. She screams and pounds the glass wall. I cry looking at her.
"Annabeth! Come back to me!"
Notes
Thanks for reading! I will update when I can!
I love the plot line! The chapters are very short by they are still good. Only note I have is maybe a little more description? Otherwise I love it!
4/28/15