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The journey to the forgotten temple

The 9th legion

Hey you Romans you lucky my friend got knocked out or you would be in a world of hurt I say. So how longs the walk five miles or ten I say. Almost their the guard says. We walked for five or Tenn minutes.
We are here we shall meet in the principa all right say the guard.
Few minutes later...... what do you want Ethan say the boy.
Before he could speak I say we demanded to see you preator of the 9th legion. How did you know I was he said. Because of the authority in your voice I say. Oh well you are charged with what? Ethan what are the charges he said. By the way names Bob. Preator they are charged with trespassing by the temple and being Greek Ethan says.
Oh Greeks my lucky day Greeks haven't seen you in a while said Bob.
Don't kill us says percy waking up. We settled the score of the rift between us he says. I used to be the preator of the 12th legion throwing a medal on the table. And look at my arm a Roman legion tattoo. Well seems you were the preator of the 12th legion.
Last time I checked their was no 12th legion how that possible says Bob. Well your some how in a different dimension I say.
Also it's been over 3,0000 years since the fall of rome.........

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Comments

This is dumb

Poppy Dill Poppy Dill
6/6/15

First off can I just say your story is awesome. Second I'm just going to give a little bit of criticism to make it better. You should ad quotation marks just so people cpcan tell the difference between talking and personal thoughts. Other than you did great!!!

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/21/15

Horrible

Constrictor Constrictor
5/21/15

Cool I'm also writing my first fan fiction its called When Kids Come to Camp. I'm homeschooled and really should be doing homework but fan fiction is way too awesome. Any how I'm going to finish this and get back to my hom

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/20/15