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The journey to the forgotten temple

I'm feel betrayed

Hey Percy do you know what jake going to do in there I say.
No figured you might know he says.Oh well probably something from the past I say. Yea that's probably it he says. Well we have wait I guess. That's when the demon attacked. Run says percy. No!! I say it well just follow us. Right okay any good ideas we ain't gonna get one from annabeth she out like a light I say. How about you hit it with a little light magic he says. Ok here goes nothing bright light escaped my fingertips hit the demon square In the chest. You cannot defeat me I seek the son of chaotic he summon the dead back to life they must pay they must return he says. Well yo- wait he summon another
soul Percy says. You kidding right? I say Yes he summon another just one he says. Look he has lost control he shall bury the temple forever in his father's realm I'm gone. He left a dark hole surrounding the temple slowly sinking the temple in it. All of a sudden it stops then
We left the stone blocking the door before I enter I he a girls voice, laughter. I opened the the door and to find jake kissing another girl.
All I say is jake how could you. Percy enters whats the matter in here is everything alright oh- I see awkward moment.

Notes

Comments

This is dumb

Poppy Dill Poppy Dill
6/6/15

First off can I just say your story is awesome. Second I'm just going to give a little bit of criticism to make it better. You should ad quotation marks just so people cpcan tell the difference between talking and personal thoughts. Other than you did great!!!

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/21/15

Horrible

Constrictor Constrictor
5/21/15

Cool I'm also writing my first fan fiction its called When Kids Come to Camp. I'm homeschooled and really should be doing homework but fan fiction is way too awesome. Any how I'm going to finish this and get back to my hom

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/20/15