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The journey to the forgotten temple

The temple of chaotic

"Well that was amazing Megan best thing I ever done with you I say."
"Thank you she says." Few minutes later after discussing the issue and following out the plan. "Here we are the temple of the lost God the temple of my father I say." A huge temple standing in front of are hero's with big pillars and a big roof. Then they see it a bright purple light shines from it. The weapon is a battle axe jake picks up the weapon and he starts to shake tremble. "Jake baby you all right asked ttrinity." All I said was "run for your life please if you love me leave close the portal take my father's weapon let me go crazy in this realm." "No jake please I love you I know you can control it remember what Percy said says trinity." We slowly creep up to jake and he was distracted by Percy we got his weapon knocked him out of the realm.
Now we returned the weapon to Olympus. Later we are chilling in the big house watching over jake. Three weeks later he still asleep Chiron says his body is going through a metamorphosis of some kind.
The good and evil is balancing out within him.

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Comments

This is dumb

Poppy Dill Poppy Dill
6/6/15

First off can I just say your story is awesome. Second I'm just going to give a little bit of criticism to make it better. You should ad quotation marks just so people cpcan tell the difference between talking and personal thoughts. Other than you did great!!!

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/21/15

Horrible

Constrictor Constrictor
5/21/15

Cool I'm also writing my first fan fiction its called When Kids Come to Camp. I'm homeschooled and really should be doing homework but fan fiction is way too awesome. Any how I'm going to finish this and get back to my hom

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/20/15