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The journey to the forgotten temple

The Dark Forest

Is everyone ready I say. Yep we are good there is no going back now okay I said. So we headed downtown so follow my senses of course the entrance is at my old place makes sense. I swore never to return once I left I was gone for good but I have to don't want to but have to.
It time to face the past the one I swore I never revisit.
It an old run down house since left I was the one who cared for it.
What a surprise no one took care of it!
I wonder if she will remember me even forgive me in left her alone
four more mouths to feed but I had a choice I chose rebirth into a new world I wonder what you will say mom? Come my friends we walk
Through the iron fence and in the yard I here "what surprise you had the guts to show up here again after what you put mom up too her feelings she felt like she failed you as a mother said Sydney.
Because she did I'm sorry but it was for the best I say.
Well you better get inside and see her said Sydney.
Watever I say. I paused at the door here we go i feel a little sick to my stomach but I knocked on the door.
Who is it? I haven't heard that sweet voice echoing thorough out the house. THE one who left for five years four minutes thirty seconds I say. Jakey poo is that really you? She thrust open the door.
Oh my sweet child finally came back! Look Evelyn I came here to use the portal you know what I'm talking about you use it to talk to too my father I say. Also no I only came to use it then I'm done with this place forever but I'm glad to see you and hear you voice again I say.
Me to my child even you say that that part of your life is over know said Evelyn. It is I would like you to meet my girlfriend trinity zeko you might have heard it on the news and Percy Jackson I say. Pleased to meet you she says. Mostly you son of the sea God! That wasn't my mom voice. What have you done my mother I say. Oh she still here but I'm borrowing it. Percy Jackson you want your girlfriend back but you powerless to do it so beware the forest plays trick on the mind. Also have fun and step into the dark forest.

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Comments

This is dumb

Poppy Dill Poppy Dill
6/6/15

First off can I just say your story is awesome. Second I'm just going to give a little bit of criticism to make it better. You should ad quotation marks just so people cpcan tell the difference between talking and personal thoughts. Other than you did great!!!

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/21/15

Horrible

Constrictor Constrictor
5/21/15

Cool I'm also writing my first fan fiction its called When Kids Come to Camp. I'm homeschooled and really should be doing homework but fan fiction is way too awesome. Any how I'm going to finish this and get back to my hom

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/20/15