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Percy Jackson, Betrayed

Maybe One Day \(°_°)/

Im just in a phase where I wanna write those over-used clichés, cuz I think I can actually make it different. I have the Thirteenth Olympian, and this one running right now. If I ciuld actually finish them, my next story would be one where Percy is banished to Tartarus :p or maybe I could do it as a sequel to Thirteenth. I plan on making that a Pertemis story(im original), so in the sequel, Zeus banishes Percy to Tartarus for falling love with Artemis. He gets tortured, comes back all angry blah blah blah. I dont know why im not writing this on the story that its gonna be the sequel to, but oh well. Imma gove yall a sorta forst look on what I plan on doing:

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy-wait wrong shate O.O oops but for real this time:


OLYMPIAN THRONE ROOM
Third-Person POV

It took five years for Zeus to calm down, and realize he had overreacted. At least, thats what it seemed to his fellow gods. Truth be told, Zeus realized just how royally he messed two months after his mistake. The king's pride refused to let him speak up earlier, however.

His anger was justified, but his actions were not. He had banished the greatest hero of all time to hell, just because he was an overbearing father. Seeing his daughter admit her love for his nephew had set Zeus over the edge. He had been shown up and proven wrong by this demigod far too much, and his pride wouldn't let another insult stand. Unfortunately for a certain raven haired son of the sea, seeking happiness was deemed an insult.

After years of pestering, threats, and rebellions, Zeus finally cracked, and ordered for the hero too be summoned before him.

Perseus Jackson appeared in the center of the throne room standing, but collapsed very quickly afterwards. The teen barely stirred, except for the occasional writhing.

"Stand, child" Zeus ordered.

He couldn't.

"Bow to me!" Zeus thundered.

He couldn't

"Give me one reason why I shouldn't send you back!" Zeus snarled.

Not a noise came forth.

The rest of the Olympians were apalled by Zeus's actions, but as they didn't know what ailed the young hero, they remained quiet.

Zeus was enraged. He shrunk to a mortal's size, before storming over to the demigod. Grabbing him by the hair, Zeus yanked his nephew up. Upon closer inspection, the king of the gods got his answers for his unspoken questions.

His legs were twisted in odd directions, thus why he couldn't stand. His arms were pinned to his sides by briken blades, that went through his arms and into his torso, thus why he couldn't bow. Zeus noticed some black circles under Jackson's jaw. He tilted the demigod's head up and inspected them.

They were screws, that bore through the hero's jaw and lower teeth, into his upper teeth, thus why he couldn't speak. Zeus noticed all this within a minute, and was terrified as to what he find upon a closer look. He quickly thrust the demigod away, and retreated to his throne.

What the king of the gods failed to notice were the threads that kept the boys lips and eyes sewn together. He failed to notice the nails hammered into the demigods ears, rendering him deaf. He failed to notice the needles protruding from his throat causing difficulty breathing. He failed to notice just what five in hell, surrounded by the worst of the worst, could do to a young demigod.




Okay, thats a wrap. Brutal eh? Tell me what ya think in the comments.

Notes

Comments

@SpartanWarriorPercy
Eh. Least you arent a mouth-hole. Those things spout way more shit XD

Guess who's back, Back again. Edge is back, tell a friend. Glad your back man, I missed you. BTW, I apologize for the comment below this one. I'm an asshole. : )

What the actual fuck. You give me crap about not finishing my stories, and yet your leaving the website with like, 10 unfinished. To go to a boring run-of-the-mill website, that doesnt even have anything to do with anything in particular. Your a hypocrite liar.

Can you post the link to your first fanfic.net story?