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Finding Love

Stupidity in it's Finest

I was sitting in class mind my own business, when suddenly birds started to fly into the window, hundreds of birds. It was all Ok until the window shattered. The birds flew into Mr. Hammers class disrupting it. They started to peck at people, well only at me really. No one was helping they were just standing there while I got my scalp ripped to shreds by birds, I thought I was going to die.

Then Conner, Conner Streigle the boy of my dreams, rushed over and was covering me up with himself, taking the impact of the birds for me. Then the birds becoming annoyed morphed into one giant creature. It swiped Conner aside and proceeded to attack me. That's when I got real angry and screamed so loud that the creature vaporized into a pile of ash. Everyone was staring at me, staring in disgust. Why did I always have to ruin everything. Then when Conner woke up he fixed everything, sort of. He grabbed me and some guy I barely even new, who had been apparently getting his head pecked to pieces, out of the room.

I mean I wasn't going to fuss, but then he started taking us to the front door, and I started to kick and scream, and that is how I ended up with a bruise the size of a watermelon on my forhead laying on a bed in an infirmary, at some Renaissance fair called Camp Halfblood

Notes

I will try to post a new chapter every week, I hope you guys like it, it's not very good. Please leave comments for me on how to improve. Thanks!!

Comments

@mikciemouse9
The first one is always the scariest yet it'll be your favorite, even if no one else likes it. Don't give up on this even if no one really likes it or people bash it. I ended up deleting my first one and I regret it because it's still one of my favorite things I ever wrote. This site is good for practice.

@Frost Wrathbomber
This is my first fanfiction and I was nervous it was gonna suck really bad. So thanks for letting me know how to make it better.

mikciemouse9 mikciemouse9
6/15/16

One suggestion, would be put more detail into each chapter. The first one went by really fast and it didn't really grab me. If you put more detail into your writing it'll be much better. Good idea though.