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The Lost Daughter - Comments, page 3

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@Percy_Jackson
Thanks! I hope I'm doing good! In hoping to get the next chapter up by tomorrow! Sorry if I don't!

Wolf_huntress Wolf_huntress
1/16/14

Good! I like it! *SUBSCRIBES*

Deadpool Deadpool
1/16/14

@theteenagefandom
Ok, now I'm done. How do you like my first chapter? Want me to do more?

Wolf_huntress Wolf_huntress
1/16/14

@Wolf_huntress


GOOD. I want to read more. :)

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
1/16/14

@theteenagefandom
OMG thanks! I'm not really finished though...

Wolf_huntress Wolf_huntress
1/16/14

I like the story! I can't wait to read more! I'd suggest making your chapters a bit longer to keep the reader interested. Hey, you could even be a troll author and throw in some cliffhangers (*cough RIORDAN *cough*) to make people really, like, ready and eager for another chapter. PLUS....I like your descriptions of things. :D Keep on going!

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
1/16/14