Leo Dies at the End - Comments, page 5

Hey guys, I probably should have made is more specific.

so first of all, the title is based off of a movie called John Dies at the End. If you have seen it, you will understand the ending of this story.
I am planning this to be between 20-30 chapters.
and last of all, I'll be starting another story soon. Not sure what it will be about, but I just wanted to inform you.
Thanks!

OMG!!!!! You used Taylor!!! :D thank you!!!!!!! :D :D

@Caleo
*Spoliers* If you have watched the movie, *John Dies at the End*, you will find out that John does not die at the end. So, Leo may die... Leo may not die.
And sorry about the spelling, I tried looking for it everywhere, but nothing showed up, so I tried to wing it.
And thanks!

so you just put what happens at the end in the title. nice. FYI, you spelled Ogygia wrong. I reread that part last night for, like, the fiftieth time. but this is still awesome!

I want Taylor Rush in there. Her dad is Zeus, and she is 16. Taylor is a girl.
thanks!

Keep writing! Really good!

This is good but you had a few spelling mistakes but I still like it!

Oh, and don't forget to throw in editing to make the story run smoother...capitalization, punctuation, etc. :) Have fun!

Yes, we read these. :) Keep on going!

good story and it's cool

AWESOME

Yeah, I read 'em. I only comment on the good ones. ;) so anyway, good work on a nice beginning and cool cliffhanger. Good luck!