The Forbidden Daughter - Comments

I absolutly adore this story! Please update more!

SORRY! I haven't updated for a whole because of stuf happening at home. When I get the chance, I will update. Also, the winner for the dresses is.....#2!

Dress 2 and 3 are beautiful, I love the simpleness of them.
I can't wait to read next chapter! :)

Dress 2. Really pretty!

2 looks best but 4 could do

Dress two is the best

Ya, opps. I will fix those as soon as I can. It kight take awhile though, because I am working on the next chapter, and it has so Drama in it.

Hey! Just to let you know, it's actually heroine not heroess.

Thanks, i am going to update on Storm Princess tonight.

Omgs it's great!

I will! I will! Planning to update tonight.

Keep going!

Thanks. Te next chapter is going to be mostly talking, but it wont be JUST talking. I will make sure to do describing and thoughts. By the way, if you guys can think if anything that you want to add to the story, please dont hold it back! I will listen to all of them and some I might include! Please, let me know and Peace Out!

-Dots

This is really good!

@FrostWrathbomber
Thanks. I always love doing Fobidden something, and so this time I decided Fobidden Daughter. Though the funny thing is, the story is just going to skyrocket from here.

@Everyone
I am no allowed to go on the comupter during weekdays, but I can go on my mobile. It might be kinda hard for me to do paragraphs, so I just wanted to let you all know. Also, I dont think I will do diffrent POVs, just becauseof how i want it to end just wont work with POVs. I am very sorrry!

can you just review my story the destinies child and perseus the unknown one.I dont know whether its good or bad.I am a newbie here and your reviews will help me.

Love it! Ur stories r awesome!

Sure, i was going to anyways because i am to start the POVs.

Hey I was wondering if in the next chapter if you could use paragraphs so it would make it easier to read please?

Thanks. I am going to give some hints in this next chapter about who she really is, but you guys are going to have to figure it out for yourselves. Though if two people guess it right (I wont tell) then i will revel who her mom is.