Islands of Guilt - Comments, page 2

@Son of Chaos
well thank you it makes me feel better

@its_dam_annabeth

Yes it is. And I truly think that.

thats a nice way to look at things c:

@Son of Chaos

@its_dam_annabeth

Then don't think of the flaws we are all perfect in every way

@Son of Chaos
thanks but once i start seeing the flaws, my brain starts to see that and only that

Don't think like that you probably don't look fugly you just think it. try to be positive

OMGs update!!!!!
PLEEEASEEE!!!!

UPDATE!!!!! Quickly I want more plz

I like it so far :)

Continue writing!!!!!!

Cool! Like it so far!!!!!

@Velvet Knight
I agree

Sorry I just get really exited whenever I see "shadowhunter" ANYWHERE. :D hehe

@Velvet Knight

Agreed...

OH MY FREAKING GODS

Wow! Great concept, good writing. Wish you would do a little more ‘showing us’ than ‘telling us,’ but overall a fine job. You integrate dialogue into the narration smoothly and just at the right times. Also, your progressive descriptions (…picking up the ends of my dress, the braided belt I made itching my side.) are subtle and perfectly placed; rather ‘Steinbeck-esque’ if you will. I love the idea of a ‘Gathering room’ on a supposed ‘Island of Loneliness…’; quite an existential framework perfectly befitting a character in her position. Can’t wait to read more!

Write more pleas

Awesome

I think this idea is interesting, although some parts confused me, so you may want to re read it a bit. Anyway, I really like the idea, but I won't subscribe until I get a little more into it.

ohh this is good