Mary-Sue Test! - Comments

148.5.... holy sh*t

-35 *look of surprise*

-35 *look of surprise*

Hmm 26. Looks like my character needs a few more character flaws

24 borderline sue I'm ok with that after all Bethany Jackson is the main character in th second half of gods fight for their child

Ahh! I made one!! Darn...

@Araneae Siqua
Well my character's a daughter of Ares, and has only met Percy and Annabeth. Her only 'powers' are strength (not super) and speed (again not super). But she did lose her memory and she's kind of overly perfect. But my new story is from two point of views. The first character, a guy, got nine but the girl originally got three because I was too scared of making a Mary-Sue, so I just added a few things and now she's twelve.

@ValdezChic

Yeah, if you don't watch out it can get high :/ The big pointer ones are the fact that a lot of people make relatives of canon characters, the fact that they overload their characters with special powers, or they just simply give them too many traits.

9 for the character in my new story but a horrible 36 for my already made one. Yeesh.

This was really helpful, thanks.

@percyjacksonismybro
Nice! I hope it comes in handy!

I will now be using this when building characters! So far I got like 10, so I'm gettign better!

Mine was 16, but it would have been WAY more if it hadn't been for the fact that her superpowers are shared with someone else and she is a kind of person that is literally always lying to avoid being cast out and most likely killed or stranded on an island like Ogygia and all that.

Mine was right at 20

Yay. Well-balanced. I had a few technicalities, though, but even then, still well-balanced.

oh no! the test
im horrified

Cool this was really good